Just some minor nitpickes: it should be "than" not "then" and "bitch-slaped" should be spelled "bitch-slapped" or "bitchslapped." Not sure if a hyphen is needed or a space.
And I just realized I spelt nitpicks wrong, so I will hang my head in shame now.
Adam's correcting your spelling/grammar instead of me? What a topsy turvy world. I'll commend you on inadvertently tying in your comic with a promotion for the new Seinfeld flick. Subliminal, but it's there. I mean, what is the deal with all these bees?
Oh, Gonch, bee-have!...Sorry, couldn't resist.
How's the comic now that it's grammatically correct?
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